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Old 02-05-2010, 06:38 PM
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Default POEMS..lets see what you got...

only poems that you wrote...be honest!

here is mine:

its one of my childhood memories fishing on cape cod:

CAHOONS HOLLOW


THERE IS A PLACE
STRETCHING TWENTY MILES
FROM POINT RACE

WHERE THE BEACH MEETS THE OCEAN
AND ELEVATED CLIFFS ARE
WEATHERED TO SHAPE

OCEANWAVES MIMICK TOGETHER
UNDER THE CAPE COD SUN
CURLING IN UNISON ALONG SHALLOWS
MAKING LONG LEGGED PLOVERS RUN

A CONTINOUS HYPNOTIC SOUND
ECHOING BETWEEN P-TOWN AND MONOMOY
BRINGING BACK DRIFTING MEMORIES
TREASURING THOUGHTS AS A BOY

AS THE SUN SETS TO THE WEST
GRASS-LIKE SHADOWS CLOUD THE SAND
SURFCASTERS WEARING CHEST-HIGH WEIGHTERS
MAKE-WAY WITH POLE IN HAND

FISHERMAN ENTER THE SEA
CASTING OUT MEMORIES OF RETURNING FATE
REMEMBERING WHEN SIZE WAS NO LIMIT
AND STRIPERS WERE FIFTY PLUS WEIGHT

SOUNDS OF SURF LESSON IN TONE
AND DARKNESS BEGINS TO FOLLOW
SKIIES TAKE SHAPE LIKE STARFISH IN THE SEA
ON THE SAND OF CAHOONS HOLLOW

(c) 2002 By MRF
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Old 02-05-2010, 06:54 PM
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Holy Cr@p..I feel like I was just there....

Sorry..not poetically inclined...
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Old 02-05-2010, 07:19 PM
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Nice Job Bro. When are you moving to Corpus. You can start a whole new one
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